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Anon [1771528] ×1
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Left side is too dark. Do some intricate yet subtle soft-brushing to really make the cannons come to life. Maybe some splatter brushes would fit as they would compliment his beard. Or else you could always do a texture piece.
You could even do metaballs or something of the sort although it may look off (like a bunch of little cannonballs xD). Tbh your best bet is the soft-brush and textures. (work it as if it were a stock image).
Seems very flat to me, Its definitely got potential but you might need to work on the depth and what Prime said.
Thanks I'll work on it :)
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Love the second! Light is LIGHT for a reason, so when you add a soft brush near it it looses that realistic effect, just something you may remember in the future. :D
Graf2 [1771528]Love the second! Light is LIGHT for a reason, so when you add a soft brush near it it looses that realistic effect, just something you may remember in the future. :D
Thanks mate the left side goes black at the end all the time, Need to find were that went wrong xD
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