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-CB- [378702] · #1
Hospital Tutorial

This is the Torn City hospital. People who get attacked, or fail a crime may be sent here to recover. If you train hard in the medical profession and reach the top job rank, you earn the ability to revive people from hospital.

No comma is needed after "attacked"

It should read:
Hospital Tutorial

This is the Torn City hospital. People who get attacked or fail a crime may be sent here to recover. If you train hard in the medical profession and reach the top job rank, you earn the ability to revive people from hospital.


-CB- [378702] · #3

alternatively, it could be:


Hospital Tutorial

This is the Torn City hospital. People who get attacked, or fail a crime, may be sent here to recover.

with a second comma