Skip to content
TORNLIFE More

Warehouse Arson Rewrite

Started by IndustrialRogue [2074412] on in Suggestions.

1 replies · 20 views · thread synced · 9 days ago · View on torn.com
About this thread

Posts archived: 2 / 2 posts (100%) · the total is Torn's reply count + the opening post at the last fetch

Counted by TornLife from the archived posts.

Archived posts
2
Discussion span
→
People posting
2
Likes on archived posts
1
Authority score
24 / 100
Historical score
13 / 100
Story score
27 / 100
Engagement score
29 / 100
IndustrialRogue [2074412]

The current Text of the Red failure of Warehouse Arson is the following:

"
  1. You break in through a window of the warehouse.
  2. You begin spreading gasoline over everything in sight, including your clothes.
  3. You strike a match and start to drop it as you make your way out of the warehouse dripping gas on your way out.
  4. You watch from a distance as firemen attempt to save the warehouse but it's apparent it's too far gone and explodes sending burning fireballs everywhere.
As you try and scramble into your car one of the loose guard dogs attacks you. You wake up a while later in the hospital.
"
 
Currently that would entail you doing the job completely correctly, but getting dogged after you succeed, yet not getting paid despite the failure happening after everything is done.
Maybe have the guard dogs attack you while sneaking in or something, otherwise it doesn't make sense that you don't get paid.
Something like:
"
  1. You break in through a window of the warehouse.
As you take out the gasoline, guard dogs begin to attack you. You wake up a while later in the hospital.

"


-John- [1691350]

Could probably write a bug report on it 

And they will rewrite it although crimes 2.0 is almost here and they will redo all the crimes anyway