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Attempts @ expression : ???

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Elbreastzzz [2414071]
Attempts @ expression
Is a beguilin' adventure of
the mental dance
Benighted the sightings of past
No strong moon lit light
Two save the voraciously shy pecks
Chirp chirp chirp chirp.
Is all dat iz, delievers….
on a take of aims of alms of whims
U not seain' hearin' anythang else.
But sheer noise of en I'm.
Vinnivich [2304578]
These sound interesting, but quite confusing and I feel they're mostly going over my head. If that mystery and ambiguity is what you intended, go for it, but I'd improve the grammar so it would be easier to grasp.