It's my first time posting my stories, I know there will be lots of typos or grammar mistakes but I hope that everyone enjoys my writing.
Story:
Some people say that madness is hidden in our minds, that it only needs a certain click to make it appear. So this is a story of a certain man, who had the best and normal childhood a brilliant man who passed A in every subject in both his school and university, he got a job in a hospital he became a well known surgeon but little did he knew that love can be a dangerous tool to destroy a man's mind. He fell in love with a gorgeous nurse who he had worked with, their relationship was so bright, that it drew attention of everyone near them, people became jealous of their happiness and some of this people tried to make them get apart from each other but they weren't successful. At the end the happy couple got married and in that curtain morning the newly wed wife appeared in front of her man with a scar in her face, the man who is now husband asked his wife what hurt her, she did not reply she said it's alright, she won't tell anyone. The man became confused he start wondering what caused her scar but he could not find the answer, after two days in the morning the wife had bruises in her face the man became afraid for his wife and again asked her what happened to her? She answered " Please don't ask me I SWEAR I WON'T TELL ANYONE!" with a lot of tears coming from her eyes, the man couldn't take it anymore, "First the scar in her face and now bruises!?" said the man to himself "I need to get the bottom of this but I can't do this alone I should tell the police".
Who do you think hurt the wife? Will the police catch this mysterious criminal? Stay tuned for the answer.
Intro: My old life was a hell, I will not specify the name because I want to forget that shit hole, I decided to start a new life and I stumbled across the newspaper that there is a city called Torn, many jobs available lots of good opportunities, hell I didn't bother read the whole article I packed my bag spit on the ground of that shit whole place and I took a piss then boarded the closest flight. From the plane I saw a lots of smoke coming out from the city didn't know what is it, didn't care to be honest if there is job opportunity I will gladly take it even in hell, the plane landed and I went to the airport, it was big and fancy, lots of people came in and out, I approached to an immigration officer an old lady sitting on a small desk and only stamp beside her, I asked " Excuse me officer...." and someone quickly shoved me and stamped his own passport and entered, I stood amazed by his action. To my surprise everyone who were behind me done the same thing as the man who stamped his passport, I looked at the officer she pointed at the stamp and ignored me doing her nails, I stamped my passport and entered, no check ups nothing! I went to the baggage area and there was no bag, I waited for several hours and nothing, I asked the security when the bags are arriving he said " New to Torn huh?", I nodded then he said " Well someone must have took it, if you are not fast enough someone else will snatch it away", "But why? Isn't there a system?!" he laughed and walked away, I had no choice but to leave the airport. I stopped a taxi and told him to take me to the nearest hotel, we drove for a while and it didn't look like we were in the city, he stopped the car and took his gun out of his jacked and said " Your money and valuables" I gave him everything I had, " your clothes" he said, I took everything except my underwear, " get out" he shouted, I stepped out of the taxi and he drove away.
I walked back to the city, ashamed and angry I asked around the nearest police station, I entered the building and approached the secretary, " I would like to report a a crime?" the secretary looked at me and said " New to Torn huh?" "yes" I replied The secretary continued " Look nudist, this is the life in Torn, you get mugged you either hospitalize them or mug them back or leave them in the streets bleeding their guts out, but don't come crying to the police we got bigger problems to death with" " But....." "There is no buts or why or God knows what you nudists say, get out!" I left with a tears coming from my eyes, I don't know anyone here, I came for work to change my life around, instead I am sinking into deeper shit hole, I sat in the alley crying, a deep voice called out to me " Hey new blood! Newborn, I mean newblood! " I looked up, it was a homeless old man holding a bottle of beer wearing a jacket with a lot of holes in it, he handed me a bottle of beer and said " drink it up, you look like had a shitty day" " You could say that yes" I replied while sipping on the beer. " My name is George what's your name?" " A dead man" I replied " Alright dead man, look you look lost and confused I get that, but don't worry old Georgy is going to get you back on your feet" " How? You look like a mess yourself, no offense" "Hahaha true, true but I choose to be a hobo,no one mugs you and no one cares but you my friend can't handle that life, unfortunately you need to sleep on the street tonight, but don't you worry you can sleep on my spot and tommorow we will fix you up" " Why are you helping me?" "And why not? I am a friendly guy, like to help out" " What do you want in return?" " Nothing, well if you can throw a nice meal in the trash can or a bottled beer you are helping this old man it's a win win" With little choice I followed this George and slept in his spot for another day in Torn city.
Hello developers, I just wanted to inform you that I saw a hospital chat but I wasn't in hospital, shortly it went out, it was quite odd and one of my faction members also confirmed that they found the same issue, unfortunately I didn't take a screenshot because after short time it disappeared. Thank you for your time.
It was rainy and the husband could not stop thinking about his wives injury, he wanted to call the police right away but he knew whoever hunts his wife will come after he sleeps.
He took a kitchen knife and sat on sofa in the living room, wondering what kind of inhumane person would do such a thing, even though he is a doctor who swore not to hurt a person to him this was exception, for duty as a family man is far more important to him than his oath as a doctor.
The was a light knock on the front door, he took his knife and hid it behind his back and slowly opened the door, it was a woman a friend of his wife, " How can I help you?" the husband asked aggressively, " Is she inside?" asked the woman with a trembling voice, " Yes, and you are not allowed to go inside I am afraid" he replied, " OK" she said and left.
He looked at the woman leaving from the door, is this the person who hurt his wife he wondered, there was a lot of women who were jealous of her relationship, maybe it's that why she is getting abused? He closed the door and sat back at his sofa.
Hours later the knock changed, this time it was loud, the man was certain that this knock is not a friendly visit, again he hid his knife behind his back and slowly opened the door, two men immediately charged from the door pushing the man on the floor, "FREEZE!" the one of the two man shouted, " You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can be used against you in court. You have the right to talk to a lawyer for advice before we ask you any questions. You have the right to have a lawyer with you during questioning. If you cannot afford a lawyer, one will be appointed for you before any questioning if you wish. If you decide to answer questions now without a lawyer present, you have the right to stop answering at any time.You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can be used against you in court. You have the right to talk to a lawyer for advice before we ask you any questions. You have the right to have a lawyer with you during questioning. If you cannot afford a lawyer, one will be appointed for you before any questioning if you wish. If you decide to answer questions now without a lawyer present, you have the right to stop answering at any time" the other man read a mirranda warning, " A Police!? wait there is a misunderstanding officer!" the man said, "Yeah yeah, and I am innocent we know, now on your feet and stop resisting" said the police officer who read the mirranda warning.
The man was driven into police station, after the police officer put him in jail, the man said "Look officer I was complying can you at least tell me why I was arrested, well forget about that just please go to my house and protect my wife someone out there is trying to abuse and injure her", the policeman left silently.
Two days passed with no reply from the policemen , they only bring food and water and take it away no matter what the man says. Finally a policeman comes and opens the door, cuffes him and took him to a police car, the man knew that he can't say anything so he put his faith in his wife if she is OK.
He was put to the court and stood in cuffs and the prosecutor stance was HIS WIFE!
" Wait, what is going on?" the man said the officer behind told him to keep quiet.
The judge comes in and the court started, the man has no lawyer on his side on the other hand his wife got one, the man could not understand what is going on, his mind became blurry and confused, the prosecutor lawyer stood up and said that the man abused and cut his wife, and that he committed a domestic violence, the case was short, and the witnesse was none other than the friend who came in and told the court of what she saw him holding a knife. The mans mind became even more foggy and he could not hear anything.
He was taken to a jail with a 4 year sentence plus a forced divorce and the wife takes all of his money.
The man gone mad, destroyed, he lost every inch of his sanity and became a hollow, a zombie who just walks idle.
Meanwhile in jail, the two jail mates were talking.
A: Who is this freak?
B: Oh didn't you know this man got screwed up by his wife, she was a crafty one I tell you.
A: Crafty?
B: Yeah she bruised and cut herself at home, and left to show it to her lesbian friend and told her that it was her husband who did that.
A:Why?
B: Money you idiot, this guy was a doctor so he got lots of money.
A: Damn he was mind screwed so hard.
B: Yeah now she lives with her lesbian friend with lots of green paper beside them.
So since Torn idea is to be anything why don't we have police or politicians in this game, I know it's dull since most of the players not interested in that but I think it's fun for example.
If faction decide to extort from other faction or if attack happens between two factions, politicians can use their diplomacy skill or perk to make two faction stops or police interferes to stop the war by force and of course they will be players who do so.
If lots of mugging happens to someone they can report it to police officers and the police will try to stop or ignore the complaint and on trade mugging, bounties and so on.
Each year a president will be elected and they hire their own staffs to put policies and laws until another election starts.
Police becomes like a faction and instead of respect they get justice points and so on.
Since I don't know anything about coding and I am kind of a newbie I thought this will be a great idea to add even more active roles to Torn.
Intro: My old life was a hell, I will not specify the name because I want to forget that shit hole, I decided to start a new life and I stumbled across the newspaper that there is a city called Torn, many jobs available lots of good opportunities, hell I didn't bother read the whole article I packed my bag spit on the ground of that shit whole place and I took a piss then boarded the closest flight. From the plane I saw a lots of smoke coming out from the city didn't know what is it, didn't care to be honest if there is job opportunity I will gladly take it even in hell, the plane landed and I went to the airport, it was big and fancy, lots of people came in and out, I approached to an immigration officer an old lady sitting on a small desk and only stamp beside her, I asked " Excuse me officer...." and someone quickly shoved me and stamped his own passport and entered, I stood amazed by his action. To my surprise everyone who were behind me done the same thing as the man who stamped his passport, I looked at the officer she pointed at the stamp and ignored me doing her nails, I stamped my passport and entered, no check ups nothing! I went to the baggage area and there was no bag, I waited for several hours and nothing, I asked the security when the bags are arriving he said " New to Torn huh?", I nodded then he said " Well someone must have took it, if you are not fast enough someone else will snatch it away", "But why? Isn't there a system?!" he laughed and walked away, I had no choice but to leave the airport. I stopped a taxi and told him to take me to the nearest hotel, we drove for a while and it didn't look like we were in the city, he stopped the car and took his gun out of his jacked and said " Your money and valuables" I gave him everything I had, " your clothes" he said, I took everything except my underwear, " get out" he shouted, I stepped out of the taxi and he drove away.
I walked back to the city, ashamed and angry I asked around the nearest police station, I entered the building and approached the secretary, " I would like to report a a crime?" the secretary looked at me and said " New to Torn huh?" "yes" I replied The secretary continued " Look nudist, this is the life in Torn, you get mugged you either hospitalize them or mug them back or leave them in the streets bleeding their guts out, but don't come crying to the police we got bigger problems to death with" " But....." "There is no buts or why or God knows what you nudists say, get out!" I left with a tears coming from my eyes, I don't know anyone here, I came for work to change my life around, instead I am sinking into deeper shit hole, I sat in the alley crying, a deep voice called out to me " Hey new blood! Newborn, I mean newblood! " I looked up, it was a homeless old man holding a bottle of beer wearing a jacket with a lot of holes in it, he handed me a bottle of beer and said " drink it up, you look like had a shitty day" " You could say that yes" I replied while sipping on the beer. " My name is George what's your name?" " A dead man" I replied " Alright dead man, look you look lost and confused I get that, but don't worry old Georgy is going to get you back on your feet" " How? You look like a mess yourself, no offense" "Hahaha true, true but I choose to be a hobo,no one mugs you and no one cares but you my friend can't handle that life, unfortunately you need to sleep on the street tonight, but don't you worry you can sleep on my spot and tommorow we will fix you up" " Why are you helping me?" "And why not? I am a friendly guy, like to help out" " What do you want in return?" " Nothing, well if you can throw a nice meal in the trash can or a bottled beer you are helping this old man it's a win win" With little choice I followed this George and slept in his spot for another day in Torn city.
It was rainy and the husband could not stop thinking about his wives injury, he wanted to call the police right away but he knew whoever hunts his wife will come after he sleeps.
He took a kitchen knife and sat on sofa in the living room, wondering what kind of inhumane person would do such a thing, even though he is a doctor who swore not to hurt a person to him this was exception, for duty as a family man is far more important to him than his oath as a doctor.
The was a light knock on the front door, he took his knife and hid it behind his back and slowly opened the door, it was a woman a friend of his wife, " How can I help you?" the husband asked aggressively, " Is she inside?" asked the woman with a trembling voice, " Yes, and you are not allowed to go inside I am afraid" he replied, " OK" she said and left.
He looked at the woman leaving from the door, is this the person who hurt his wife he wondered, there was a lot of women who were jealous of her relationship, maybe it's that why she is getting abused? He closed the door and sat back at his sofa.
Hours later the knock changed, this time it was loud, the man was certain that this knock is not a friendly visit, again he hid his knife behind his back and slowly opened the door, two men immediately charged from the door pushing the man on the floor, "FREEZE!" the one of the two man shouted, " You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can be used against you in court. You have the right to talk to a lawyer for advice before we ask you any questions. You have the right to have a lawyer with you during questioning. If you cannot afford a lawyer, one will be appointed for you before any questioning if you wish. If you decide to answer questions now without a lawyer present, you have the right to stop answering at any time.You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can be used against you in court. You have the right to talk to a lawyer for advice before we ask you any questions. You have the right to have a lawyer with you during questioning. If you cannot afford a lawyer, one will be appointed for you before any questioning if you wish. If you decide to answer questions now without a lawyer present, you have the right to stop answering at any time" the other man read a mirranda warning, " A Police!? wait there is a misunderstanding officer!" the man said, "Yeah yeah, and I am innocent we know, now on your feet and stop resisting" said the police officer who read the mirranda warning.
The man was driven into police station, after the police officer put him in jail, the man said "Look officer I was complying can you at least tell me why I was arrested, well forget about that just please go to my house and protect my wife someone out there is trying to abuse and injure her", the policeman left silently.
Two days passed with no reply from the policemen , they only bring food and water and take it away no matter what the man says. Finally a policeman comes and opens the door, cuffes him and took him to a police car, the man knew that he can't say anything so he put his faith in his wife if she is OK.
He was put to the court and stood in cuffs and the prosecutor stance was HIS WIFE!
" Wait, what is going on?" the man said the officer behind told him to keep quiet.
The judge comes in and the court started, the man has no lawyer on his side on the other hand his wife got one, the man could not understand what is going on, his mind became blurry and confused, the prosecutor lawyer stood up and said that the man abused and cut his wife, and that he committed a domestic violence, the case was short, and the witnesse was none other than the friend who came in and told the court of what she saw him holding a knife. The mans mind became even more foggy and he could not hear anything.
He was taken to a jail with a 4 year sentence plus a forced divorce and the wife takes all of his money.
The man gone mad, destroyed, he lost every inch of his sanity and became a hollow, a zombie who just walks idle.
Meanwhile in jail, the two jail mates were talking.
A: Who is this freak?
B: Oh didn't you know this man got screwed up by his wife, she was a crafty one I tell you.
A: Crafty?
B: Yeah she bruised and cut herself at home, and left to show it to her lesbian friend and told her that it was her husband who did that.
A:Why?
B: Money you idiot, this guy was a doctor so he got lots of money.
A: Damn he was mind screwed so hard.
B: Yeah now she lives with her lesbian friend with lots of green paper beside them.
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It's my first time posting my stories, I know there will be lots of typos or grammar mistakes but I hope that everyone enjoys my writing.
Story:
Some people say that madness is hidden in our minds, that it only needs a certain click to make it appear. So this is a story of a certain man, who had the best and normal childhood a brilliant man who passed A in every subject in both his school and university, he got a job in a hospital he became a well known surgeon but little did he knew that love can be a dangerous tool to destroy a man's mind. He fell in love with a gorgeous nurse who he had worked with, their relationship was so bright, that it drew attention of everyone near them, people became jealous of their happiness and some of this people tried to make them get apart from each other but they weren't successful. At the end the happy couple got married and in that curtain morning the newly wed wife appeared in front of her man with a scar in her face, the man who is now husband asked his wife what hurt her, she did not reply she said it's alright, she won't tell anyone. The man became confused he start wondering what caused her scar but he could not find the answer, after two days in the morning the wife had bruises in her face the man became afraid for his wife and again asked her what happened to her? She answered " Please don't ask me I SWEAR I WON'T TELL ANYONE!" with a lot of tears coming from her eyes, the man couldn't take it anymore, "First the scar in her face and now bruises!?" said the man to himself "I need to get the bottom of this but I can't do this alone I should tell the police".
Who do you think hurt the wife? Will the police catch this mysterious criminal? Stay tuned for the answer.