Active daily and looking for a music store. Don’t care about money just want to get my stats up
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- Total 615
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DemetriGxC [4175765] Level 29 Dead Fragment DEAD Reaper
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- Company Recruitment
- Faction Recruitment
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W simple and easy. But I would add some type of conclusion like a quote or something. The layout is similar to a speech or an essay(who you are → what you offer → what you expect → why someone should join → call to action.). The 3 main points could be Benefits, What We Expect, who we want. In the introduction I think we should use "We" more to to show community, confidence, team identity and exclusivity/belonging. For the second and third sentences maybe:
"We’re focused on developing competitive, disciplined players who want to push their limits and climb the Hall of Fame. With an organized war roster and coordinated gameplay, we aim to win wars, grow stronger, and maximize member earnings."
and
"We run frequent Ranked Wars alongside 4 optional training months per year for book usage and focused battle stat growth."
I apologize if I am over stepping but overall like the recruitment page. I am taking critical writing and public speech in Uni right now so a lot of this is fresh in my mind.
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W simple and easy. But I would add some type of conclusion like a quote or something. The layout is similar to a speech or an essay(who you are → what you offer → what you expect → why someone should join → call to action.). The 3 main points could be Benefits, What We Expect, who we want. In the introduction I think we should use "We" more to to show community, confidence, team identity and exclusivity/belonging. For the second and third sentences maybe:
"We’re focused on developing competitive, disciplined players who want to push their limits and climb the Hall of Fame. With an organized war roster and coordinated gameplay, we aim to win wars, grow stronger, and maximize member earnings."
and
"We run frequent Ranked Wars alongside 4 optional training months per year for book usage and focused battle stat growth."
I apologize if I am over stepping but overall like the recruitment page. I am taking critical writing and public speech in Uni right now so a lot of this is fresh in my mind.
Active daily and looking for a music store. Don’t care about money just want to get my stats up
- Manual labor 216
- Intelligence 159
- Endurance 240
- Total 615