Hey all,Haven't made a tag since a month or two before RESPO, finally got ps on my laptop today so Im working on de-rusting.CnC on this tag please :DTag 3 V1[image: i58.tinypic.com]Tag 2 V1[image: i62.tinypic.com]V2 - Made it brighter it looked brighter in the dark bg of ps[image: i59.tinypic.com]V2 BnW[image: i60.tinypic.com]Tag 1 V1[image: i57.tinypic.com]V2 & V3- Worked on lighting, burning, C4Ds over shoulders for depth, fixed some weird fractal issues that gave a hard eraser impression. Not shown to save space.V4 - More burning based on Haze's suggestion, lightened the right gun to make less dark. Final Version.[image: i58.tinypic.com]
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Haze [1589356] ×5 Six [1691188] ×3 -Ag3nt- [1196263] ×1 TheEvilRock [1276473] ×1 Hades [1728299] ×1 Legalize [1802205] ×1 Ork [1861276] ×1
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Looks good mate maybe a bit more light on the right side as on the render it has light reflections ,but over all good mate R+
Hop [1861276]Looks good mate maybe a bit more light on the right side as on the render it has light reflections ,but over all good mate R+
Thanks for that mate, was definitely struggling a bit with lighting on this piece, will get V2 up soon :)
Mentions: Ork [1861276]
V3 up
Glad to see you back. I will CNC when I get to my PC. Had some stuff come up today... Was no fun o.0
Good to see your work back in graphics Cosmic....+ rated.
prime- [1196263]Glad to see you back. I will CNC when I get to my PC. Had some stuff come up today... Was no fun o.0
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Second tag up
Mentions: -Ag3nt- [1196263]
Well done there both awesome.
(: R+
TheEvilRock [1276473]Well done there both awesome.
(: R+
Thanks mate :)
Mentions: TheEvilRock [1276473]
V3 is superb imoOnly thing im criting on is the contrast between both guns. I know because of the light it's correct but the right gun just looks drained
Had to find something ^^
Oh and the massive sharp dash on the renders face. See if blurring it slightly will change it aesthetically. I guess not but still
More edit. Maybe burn the vertical edges to enclose the tag a little more. Encorperate more burn (darnkness) with the c4d at the bottom as this is the darkest point in the tag. Then fade upwards
Had to find something ^^
Oh and the massive sharp dash on the renders face. See if blurring it slightly will change it aesthetically. I guess not but still
More edit. Maybe burn the vertical edges to enclose the tag a little more. Encorperate more burn (darnkness) with the c4d at the bottom as this is the darkest point in the tag. Then fade upwards
Haze [1589356]V3 is superb imo
Only thing im criting on is the contrast between both guns. I know because of the light it's correct but the right gun just looks drained
Had to find something ^^
Oh and the massive sharp dash on the renders face. See if blurring it slightly will change it aesthetically. I guess not but still
More edit. Maybe burn the vertical edges to enclose the tag a little more. Encorperate more burn (darnkness) with the c4d at the bottom as this is the darkest point in the tag. Then fade upwards
Thanks man will get a V4 up soon :) By the sharp dash do you mean the cut? Ill see what I can do haha
V2 of second tag up as well
Mentions: Haze [1589356]
Aaand welcome back again! Making sure you feel welcome ;)
I'm hardly coping with typing at the moment cause well you know, but I shall have another look over in the morning but I can see that you're at least following advice and improving so that's great! :D
Ok tag number one... i feel the light should come from the right and like over her face and the left side the light should behind her if ya get me ...
Also maybe add some motion blur and light in background and foreground to create a little depth
V.3 is the best if you tone down the orange a lil
Tag 2 i like but i think the green and blue are not blending togheter .. and the Bnw seems boring ... Maybe add some blue and green lights or textures or fractals ... maybe have some blue light shooting from his hands because you have the green c4d coming from his hand etc .. Nice work man R+ (Im not great at cnc but i try xD)
Cosmic [1691188]Haze [1589356]V3 is superb imo
Only thing im criting on is the contrast between both guns. I know because of the light it's correct but the right gun just looks drained
Had to find something ^^
Oh and the massive sharp dash on the renders face. See if blurring it slightly will change it aesthetically. I guess not but still
More edit. Maybe burn the vertical edges to enclose the tag a little more. Encorperate more burn (darnkness) with the c4d at the bottom as this is the darkest point in the tag. Then fade upwards
Thanks man will get a V4 up soon :) By the sharp dash do you mean the cut? Ill see what I can do haha
V2 of second tag up as well
Yeah, well whatever the thing is below the right eye, her left
Legalize [1802205]Ok tag number one... i feel the light should come from the right and like over her face and the left side the light should behind her if ya get me ...
Also maybe add some motion blur and light in background and foreground to create a little depth
V.3 is the best if you tone down the orange a lil
Tag 2 i like but i think the green and blue are not blending togheter .. and the Bnw seems boring ... Maybe add some blue and green lights or textures or fractals ... maybe have some blue light shooting from his hands because you have the green c4d coming from his hand etc .. Nice work man R+ (Im not great at cnc but i try xD)
Thanks bish xD
Will get a V4 up and hopefully another tag today, tag 2 was for Synk and he is satisfied so I will leave it at that, but I'll remember what you said for the future :)
Mentions: Legalize [1802205]
Much better mate :)
Prefer the black and white one doe ;)
3rd tag up!
There is some lighting issues on the tag. Have a loo at this screenshot to explain it.
The cyan arrow is where the light should come from. The red line is the evidence.
Hades [1728299]There is some lighting issues on the tag. Have a loo at this screenshot to explain it.
The cyan arrow is where the light should come from. The red line is the evidence.
Where's the screenshot D:
Mentions: Hades [1728299]
Your c4d flow looks pretty good from mobile. As far as the whole piece I will need my PC to go into fine details.