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Official Halloween Spooky Torn Short Story Comp.

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AnimeAi [1614035]

Adding this now, it may be revised before the final entry date though!

A Torn and Broken Halloween.



Karalynn had always loved the dark and crime-ridden Torn City with its native fauna of drug addicts, petty thieves and a multitude of different drugs. Thanks to her many years of training in gyms, and a stint in the army, it was a place where she never felt worried walking the streets late at night. The only person she knew who concerned her was DaveO. She noticed him day after day walking a sheep through the back streets which in itself might be considered unusual, but the part that really niggled her was every day without fail, it was a different sheep.

While she owned a private island, along with the vast majority of the residents in Torn City, the recent recession had forced everybody to downsize. She, along with the others working for the King of Torn had been moved into a small secure compound. As might be expected in a small piece of land full of people used to acres of space to themselves tensions were running high. Tempers were are breaking point and a full scale war between Sweeney_Todd and Kharma had only just been averted with a few well timed whip strikes from PimptressTrish. She wasnt sure whether it was the constant gunfire, the strange smells emanating from Clansdancers laboratory, the distressed baa-ing that could always be heard when DaveO was alone or the strange lights and sounds of a knife being sharpened that always came from tornberrys quarters that put her most on edge. Perhaps it was the body laying in the dark corner to her left. Wait That wasnt right! She took a firm grip on her Pink Mac 10 and hugged the wall, looking around for any movement. No, not a body, several bodies. She stepped closer and a hand reflexively flew to her mouth as she saw the mangled, barely recognisable remains. This is sick she thought as she saw Davzzs head sitting on Hydr0s torso, a pair of arms obviously belonging to Teardrop and a pair of legs that could only be from MiSsxMiNx

She hurried back to her small room, not wanting to be anywhere near that gruesome mess and began to prepare herself in case she was next. Who could do something like this? She thought as she strapped on body armour. I know Sergey, M_Mike, Bigset1 and the others in the beard with socks and sandels brigade have all been pushed to breaking point recently with this new system King Chedburn wants made but pure murder? At least our fights can normally be patched up by a few well placed shots of morphine and a little bandaging from a first aid kit. Nobody has ever died before She finished strapping on the helmet and wondered what to do next. Allies she thought, but who can I trust?! OK, then, weapons Clansdancer must have something hidden in that lab I can use!

Checking outside her door she tiptoed down the hall and out into the chilly night air, making her way stealthily towards the lab where who knows what happens. The site that met her eyes was chilling, -Clansdancer was strapped to one of her own benches, the machines whirring and a heavy scent of ether on the air. She wasnt the only one though. Every bench was full. Divalicious, Jaiden-, even the butler Jenkins were all tied in place with eyes wide and unblinking. The machines buzzed and a noxious looking green fluid pumped into every arm through an impossibly large needle. I know she brainwashed people in here to turn them into perfect subjects for King Chedburn, but this is just wrong Karalynn thought as she surveyed the scene. She tapped a few of the unmoving corpses with the end of her automatic and grimaced as heads lolled or cooling flesh puckered. Even opium isnt going to fix these poor souls she murmured. The next room was worse While the lab had never smelled right, it had certainly never spelled of blood and eviscerated intestines before. She saw the glistening grey tubes, dripping with red and brown ichor that used to be safely inside IceBlueFire, Impact-Blur and Apnea and supressed a gag.

She picked her way across the room, trying desperately not to step in any puddles of unknown bodily fluids and rested a hand on the next door I have to do this she whispered to herself, in a vain attempt to bolster confidence that had ebbed away at the sight or so much recent death and slowly opened the door a crack. She saw the back of Twos head, his chair turned away and facing a computer screen and slowly, her eyes getting used to the dim light recognised others. DevilSoldier60, Mr-Torn, Xukusari and Mix were all sitting very still, facing away from her. There was no sound in the room except the quiet hum of monitors flashing up stats and messages. Damn she thought no typing sounds. She edged closer and spun Twos chair. The grizzly mask that was once his face stared back at her. His eyelids had been removed, his mouth glued shut and his arms and legs crudely nailed to the chair. His skin was a ghostly pallor so it seems at least one of the nails had hit a major artery. She stalked around the room, her breath held and praying there might be just one person left who could tell her what happened. It was futile though, nobody in this room could tell her anything now. Wait though, in blood on the desk in front of Two there was a shaky smear ....d.u.n was all she could make out with any certainty.

Skirting around the multitude of corpses she didnt want to identify anymore Karalynn strode through the gilt laden palace, the pictures of Chedburn grinning down at her from every conceivable angle. Every statue was adorned with body parts but she steeled her nerve and placed both hands on the ancient iron bound oak doors leading into her final destination. Despite their size, a light push opened them and there on the throne was Chedburn. His features were wrong. His clothes were right but his face was pallid, the eyes too sunken to be real. W-Who are you she choked out! Suck on my donkey dick came the response. His voice was high pitched, a maleficent and baleful slur to it. Wont let me be staff indeed! No more staff left! No more King! the fake Chedburn crowed. As he stood, the flesh mask fell away leaving behind the features of Duncan. Each hand brandished an axe, the blades stained a ruddy brown with old blood. Oh Duncan What have you done? Karalynn cried. Done? DONE? Ive become the new king my sweet, and you shall be my concubine! Karalynn felt her hand tighten on her handbag which despite all appearances had been her most trusty weapon while prowling the dark streets of Torn City. Is that how you propose to your Queen? she spat, hoping to keep him on edge while she sidled closer. She let her guns clatter noisily to the ground, knowing she would never be able to flick the safeties off and aim in time to end this and just as she came within range of the axes swung for all she was worth! The rare Italian leather smacked into Duncans stained face with bone cracking force (helped of course by the brick she usually carried in there) and he teetered for a moment before regaining his balance. You thought a HANDBAG would finish me? he bellowed and swung both axes in large arcs, meeting Karalynns neck with a meaty thunk... No, NOT meeting her neck in fact. The air blurred as Karalynn ducked the clumsy swings. Fast as lighting her handbag swung again, this time in a vicious uppercut that left Duncan dazed. Karalynn breathed hard, sweat glistening off her face as she watched his form topple to the ground.

Karalynn sagged as the sirens and flashing lights came closer, it was almost over. She placed a foot on the unmoving Duncans chest and felt slight movement as he breathed. I guess I dont have it in me to kill a man she thought as the sounds of wretching and vomiting policemen filled her ears. In time and with empty stomachs they led him away in cuffs but not before he came around enough to curse I would have gotten away with it too if I hadnt thought you too weak to be a threat! Karalynn sighed as the called her pilot and made her way slightly unsteadily to the airport. At least now she might get some peace back on her very own Island. One thing was for sure, no trick or treaters could bother her there... She'd had enough of zombies, blood and guts for an entire lifetime!
The_Totem [1763443]

The Herds, they're right behind me. For every breath I take, and every inch of a step I moved, I feel like them. Determined. Running as your life depends on it. But unlike us, they have nothing to lose. Nothing to fear. I see the light in the end of this Hell. I look back to see the herds' faces in the bright light. They slowed down, but it didn't help with the chills they gave me, with their looks. One look, and I lost all hope. They were beyond saving. What I saw, wasn't human anymore.

We celebrated, with what little we had. At night, I can barely sleep. How did it get like this? When did it started? Why did it happened?

I remember, when Torn was still around. It was hell to live. I remembered, the lab accident. That one day, when an employee was fired. My boss, being the hot-tempered that he is, being loud enough for everyone to hear the employee's mistakes. His office windows were alright soundproof. Some of the other employees, especially the female ones, chuckled quietly over her mistakes. I did as well.

The elevator opened, and 3 figures emerged. A beautiful looking woman, and two men, who looked like they came back from the Vietnam war. The boss yells me over to his office. There I learned the woman's name, Kristina. The two men escorted Sabrina out of the building. The boss quickly promoted me to Sabrina's position, which meant I get more by the hours.

Almost a week has passed since then. Only two and a half hours left. Everyone was tired as usual by now. Then, the elevator opened. Sabrina was there, and the boss haven't noticed yet. I didn't want to lost my position, so I stayed silent. And it all happened in a flash. She kicked the boss's door opened, and all we heard was two loud pop. Silence followed, and she came to us. Aimed her gun at us. I had a glanced before I ducked under a cubical. Her gun, loud as Siren, and it's voice kills. The shooting continued, and a bullet or two struck the lab's glass. At the time, we had limbs of the undead. Testing, as a weapon. We were close to weaponizing it. Shattering the glass meant the odor would've got out: With the improvement we made to infect the enemies, if we breath too much in, we get infected. I hold my breath for, what felt like hours.

The chaos ended, after the arrival of machine gun's bullets. I rushed out, and saw one pointed at me. He dropped his aim. It was the building's security. I dashed out, toward the elevator. I ran, and never looked back.

Only a few hours have passed, and people are getting infected, once again. Hell broke lose, and the gangs laughed amongst the chaos. But, it wasn't long before the laughter stopped. These infected, they're different. They get stronger overtime, if they're not killed. Those lucky enough to board the planes, never came back. The later ones crashed, and all hope for escaped were gone. The hospital was gone by then. And the jail was one of the safer places. But, that didn't last long.

Almost a year have passed, since then. The undead, or as we called them now, the Herds. They live underneath. Where the shine doesn't affect them. Where the darkness protects them. The remainders of us try our best to live, with what little hope we have left. The survivors of Torn's aftermath, are now sleeping on top a graveyard.
KendrickLamar [1695429]

Once Chedburn invited me and Jack to visit his mysterious castle.Surrounded with lush green fields and fortified walls,the castle had a certain medieval look to it.We went inside,there i saw Sergey,M_Mike,Davzz,Tornberyyand Prodi all dressed in a particular white attire.It was my first tour so i grew a bit uneasy.In the dark corridors i felt as if someone was following me or as if there was someone in the shaking suit of armour kept in the hallway.I could hear wierd noises and sense a blur figure standing right in front of us at times.I wanted to ask Chedburn about all this but i remained tight-lipped.Finally,at the end of our tour,i managed to ask Chedburn"Did you ever feel the presence of any paranormal spirit in your castle?" He replied sternely"No,never during my stay here" And how long have you been staying here?"I asked curiously."Well about 300 years".he said.



Happy Halloween


Larten_Crepsley [1569797]

would have entered if it wernt for mentioning 30 staff members. I'll sit this one out.

Basically guys,it cant be a short story, but good luck to all who participate.
Td3h [1785428]
Larten_Crepsley [1569797]would have entered if it wernt for mentioning 30 staff members. I'll sit this one out.

Basically guys,it cant be a short story, but good luck to all who participate.

Have hit 4.6k words in mine. Not quite short, yeah. :D


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ThiefStreet [1849536]

I try my best to compete and make my own story, hope you guys like it. english is my second language and sorry for my bad english.

-------The Castle------

A hoarse sound wake me up at night in the castle which is located deep in the forest at Red Light. The castle looks very old and dark. I find myself lie down right next to corpses which is some of them have been chopped off their body parts. Heads, hands, legs are hanging around with hooks just below the ceiling.The blood drip and the walls splattered with it. After looking around a bit, it appear to be im in a kitchen room.

I still in a good condition, except my head. Feel dizzy a little bit. Sound of steps can be heard not so far away and its become louder and louder . i pretend to lie down and took a sneak peek. Sergey (the butcher,a fat man with torned shorts) dragging a body.Luckily, he just passing by. He place the body on the table and begin to chop it. His back is facing towards me. This could be the end of me if i dont escape so i crawled away from him.

Leaving the kitchen room leads me to a hallway. There are many rooms along the hallway and the end of the hallway is the entrance of the castle. Along the hallway, i can see portraits of PimptressTrish, Davzz, aurel1, toshykazu, tornberry, Artem, M_Mike , Bigset1, vysdel2. Not to mention there are some dead bodies lying along the hallways. i finally made an escape that night. Wonder

In the next day, i wake up in noon. Watch TV news as usual. Reporter Karalynn, DrZED, ThatIrishGuy, poptop, weeble and blondie had been interview Chedburn frequently for the following upcoming Respo. i decided to go checkout some new armours in item market located in North side of Torn city. Strangely, no one tries to mug me along the way. Usually these gang of muggers (RatedR, Chaos_Greg, 787thWarDog and Prodi will mug me right away when i step outside.I call my friends Hate_Train, blondie, Hydro, weeble but they cant hear me at all. Because im bored with my life, I go inside item market and do some shoplifting instead window shopping.

That night i finally get back home after doing crimes without get caught.i feel so tired so i fell asleep on my bed. That night there was also an attempt to burn my home and I didnt notice my home is burning by these six criminals Divalicious, MISsxMiNx, Porny, HenkiePuk, DaveO, and Marc Biccy. The police puts the bounty on these six criminals. Feels weird with myself i figure out that im actually dead long time ago by te butcher.Thats explain everything.

















0ffline [1822187]
Torn Tales Volume V: The Story of The Gashlycrumb Tornies? Gruesome Bad Poetry To Die For.


Halloween stories are often tales
Where there's only one girl who ever prevails
She's the one in the group who keeps her wits
While her homies and friends get hacked to shit

And whaddya know, Torn's just the same
In the carnage of October only one remains
Clansy to some, heather to others
She's the only one smart enough to duck and cover

Two went first, but that's no surprise
He took pitchfork to the face, right through the eyes
Kharma tried to help him but dropped the ball
He got a really short rope and a really long fall

Not even divaliscious stood much of a chance
When the brick hit her head and made it down to her pants
And while Jenkins just in training they did what they could
But taking a grenade to the face just can't be good

You can't really hide from Halloween
As Mix soon learned when they were fed their own spleen
This holiday really ain't for the meek
And when teardrop turned to pulp that was just the first week

With three weeks to go, Apnea tried to hide
As the receiver of a cleaver she might as well have not tried
The next body to the tally was a gruesome end
Poor swag dodged the flag and got the pole in stead

Who'se the killer, who'se the villain wiping everyone out??
Can't be Prodi, he died gorey, but we'll figure it out
Maybe Sweeney? He's a meaney and a barber as well
But he's flat and kinda pulpy since the piano fell

Taktikz had a plan to hide out in the shed
Behind a rack of chainsaws and is suffice to say dead
Uriel was butchered but by no fault of his own
At least that's what we're guessing as all we found was his bones

FallenGuardian is hearty, so surely they'll survive
Not so fast though, and under a tractor means he's not alive
Fluffy, surely fluffy, will escape a gruesome demise
Huh, now that you mention it, where is that guy?

Over here. Over there. And over there in that tree
There's bits of him everywhere at the start of week three
But not heather, not Clansy, she's safe and sound
She's still walking and still talking and not 6 feet below ground

Now a thresher is for farming and it's hard to beat
But when a thresher drives through town it's going to churn up the meat:
Xukusari, EvilFast, Mr-Torn and -18-
Were chewed up and then spewed out of that hellish machine

But who's driving and surviving at the wheel of that beast?
And where's heather, where's clansy? Someone find her at least!
She's not driving, that was forgey, and he's no longer a threat
He crashed the thresher into the ocean and is as dead as dead gets

Ok this is tedious let's just get this shit done!
Fire up the steamroller and line em up for fun!
Davz was flattened quickly, Sergey papered out and burst
weebl took a couple tries and wouldn't die at first

Hydro, that was tricky, and took more than most to snuff
But bears with spears and PCP did it good enough
Marc was quite resilient and it took more than you'd guess
But five thousand ravenous Yorkies leave one helluva mess.

Yet no heather, No, Not Heather, Not a chance, no sir, no way
That doesn't mean the others can't be placed in harms way!
Aurel was fired by a trebuchet damn near to outter space
Bl0ndie fed to flaming penguins, who ate her whole! Without a trace!

DrZed was only wounded, when he tripped over a stool
Chaos_Greg was not so lucky, his bloated corpse is in the pool
Tornberry was like the others, churned and smooshied down to bits
ThatIrishGuy got ebola, and as a death that one's the shits

There's not much plot or story here, just gore and bold demise
Like the campy horror films of the eighties, nothing fancy, no surprise
And still clansy, and still heather, still intact, and still unharmed
And so is Chedburn? How'd that happen? Don't be alarmed...

Ched's no dummy, he was hiding, in a heather suit, you see!
Heather's Clansy! Chedburn's Heather!! It's all a conspiracy!!!
Well we can't have that for halloween, no fancy plot twists here!
No plot at all, it seems, well shit, I guess they'll die next year?
edward096 [1818809]

Midnight adventures

The Halloween party was abt to start it was 12 midnight of 31st October. Chedburn had invited all the staffs for a Halloween party. Minx had just walked into the city hall to find all other staffs confused. -clansdancer, sergey and Hydro were standing in front of the crowd addressing them, my fellow staffs I know it looks weird that ched isnt here in the party and that no other player is here but lets split and find Ched. Clans looked at her watch and said , it shows that he is online so he must be around lets go around and search for him Sergey and Hydro started deciding teams.

Team 1: Artem Thatirishguy , Drzed, passie and Daveo formed a team and head towards the west side


Team 2: Bigset1, blondie, weebl , Prodie and porny formed another team and head for the north side

Team 3: Pimptresstrish , -clansdancer , Minx , divalicious and -18- head towards the red light district

Team 4: forgey , fluffy , blindside, deft , taktikz and 787th wardog were to go and meet the loan shark to see if anything had happened., 787thwardog turned around complaining, I aint going there, I still owe him around 500k , 500k , you used merits didnt you interrupted blindside. Well I loved the shark tag Taktikz grinned and said , dont worry I got it covered yeah mr. holy grail winner , showoff WD ended the convo and started walking followed by the rest of his team.

And the last team team 5: poptop , karalynn, swag , icebluefire and Apnea formed the final group and headed towards the east side while the rest kept a watch on the centre.

Poptop and her team was in the middle of nowhere just an empty field decorated by old witch cauldrons and electronic pumpkins and an eerie of silence poised in the atmosphere. They had just began searching and clearly they were surprised. Karalynn pulled her armalite out and pointed towards the dark end of the road, poptop pulled her diamond bladed knife out and turned towards karalynn , dont worry I got it covered, though it was a bit too silent for a normal day with no other gamers around. The group was now stumbling in dark when Apnea switched on a torch. A torch? Didnt know there was a torch in the game asked swag confused. Well its the new city watch, Greefus did a few adjustments to my old watch explained Apnea. 3 mins since the incidence a shrill voice tore through the silence, Brainsssssssssssssssssssss!!!! leapt out a zombie from nowhere. brainsssssss it screamed . OMG a zombie exclaimed swag pulled his gun out and started firing towards the zombie in an instant. Hmm the zombie shrugged, you my friend cannot kill me, not strong enough well attacking system 2.0, here it comes said poptop and pulled out her armalite , joined by karalynn and the rest of the group. Wait hold on, the zombie removed her mask, its me, I am Foxxxeh. Its Halloween thought might enjoy a bit, and where are you guyz going? Karalynn looked at her , took a sigh and said, we are searching for ched , hes been missing well sorry to say but no chedburn ahead , the roads blocked, theres a boulder in the road said Foxxxeh . poptop quickly pulled her laptop out and messaged Clans abt her findings. And headed back for the city hall.

Clans looked at trish and said, there goes team 5. Even team 1, team 2 and team 4 couldnt find anything. I ordered them to go back to city hall, so guess its only upon us. The rest of the team nodded. The team quietly walked under the yellow streetlights flashing over their head. The team ready with weapons at their dispose were walking through the street when they heard footsteps rushing towards them. The group raised their guns at the direction of the sound, who is there? called out trish. Two youngsters shawkirin and you came out from behind the bushes both of them holding a rose in their hand, we come in piece said the young lads. And youll leave in pieces if you do anything to the rose, hand them over scolded Trish. The lads quickly dropped the roses and ran away. hmm wonder why they are in here when no one else is, or more like what are they running away from? guess well find out said clans and started walking forward before they could realize they were in hallow town hallow town how did this happen? asked divalicious I dont know but well ask ched when we find him said clans. Bad boys bad boys what you gonna do? What you gonna do we coming for you a harsh voice pierced through the silence. Clans and others peeped from behind the bushes, crap thats bill the butcher! exclaimed Minx. Clans walked out of the bushes and stood in front of Bill. Bill took notice of her and hacked her with her machete but to no prevail. Yeah abt that Bill, I am an admin, you cant hurt me, but my frnds back there in the bushes can be hurt go try your luck there saying so Clans brushed passed him leaving him to chase the recently scared and hard on their foot staffs. She walked into the woods and saw a police station. Clans slowly walked in through the door and saw ched sitting their behind the bars with henkiepie and poptop. what are you guys doing here? asked clans surprised, well we saw ched tried to bust him out but got caught said henkipie, see I told you steal and then arson but na you wanted to waste your nerves instead said poptop in an angry voice looking at henkie. Well its all good but why ched in here is asked Clans staring at the cop. well I caught him peiing in public explained the cop shrugging his shoulders. Clans quickly turned his shoulder towards ched. Dont even ask abt it ched said in a dead voice while others started at him. Before they could say anything else they heard the engine revving outside the jail. A man in a hoodie walked out of the car. Wait is that the respo hoodie? asked poptop. Indeed said a familiar voice, its me Drzed said the man holding two hammers in his hand. Yeah but why are you holding ban hammers? asked henkie hmm I heard someone say bad boys, so just in case explained Drzed. Well that was Bill informed Clans. Wow Bill gates plays torn, I did know abt Morgan freeman and Sasha grey but bill gates too?

Bill the butcher said Clans Grinding her teeth, but what abt our current situation she asked. Yeah its a bug, I can fix it when I come out of the jail said ched pointing at the timer which said 5 more hours. Well in that case happy Halloween said Drzed pointing a business card towards the cop and finally freeing Ched who finally restored the balance and all other players logged in enjoying their Halloween evening in torn.


Damia [975347]

Friday night, the city seems quiet. In the center of the city I can see orange and black lights on and cars parked in the new staff parking garage. Looks like someone was in a hurry the way that Mercedes is parked. They must have been late. Feeling a slight bump Chedburn walks past.



The boss has arrived now almost everyones here except Davzz. Sergey, M-Mike, Bigset1, Artem, aurel1,toshykazu and tornberryvysdel2 sit back with a few energy drinks. Who knows how long this night will be.



I turn and walk toward the museum or so I thought. Tripping over a stone I break my heel. Before I can say #$! there stands Sweeney_Todd shaking a finger at me holding a goodie bag in his other hand. He walks past silently still giving me that no you dont look. Good thing he cant read my thoughts.



I straighten my dress and out of nowhere comes a big blue elf that knocks me down, kicks me grabbing all my money. An elf? I swear Im going crazy. Before I know it ThatIrishGuy (whats his name?), DaveO and poptop help me up. Along comes Aeroroot, Impact-Blur and Marc to check on everything. I brush myself off say thanks and wave.



Deciding this walking is getting a little weird I decide to steal a car. First Im going to try and sneak in IRC and see whats going on. OH NO Evil-Fast must have thought sneak didnt mean go in quietly. Time to step on the gas and head to the Casino to place a few bets.



Who is that laughing? Peeking around the corner is Blindside, fluffly and Madmiketyson with a pile of candy in front of each of them. Each one betting how many pieces they could throw into the Jack O Lantern lamp. Someone should tell them the top doesnt come off. ~giggles~ Blondie and Prodi are doubled over laughing so hard.



Getting back in the car I decide to head home and see hubby. Its Friday and Ghost deserves a little treat. BANG! Now what. Someone shot my tires out. This night just keeps getting better and what is that sound I keep hearing. It must be in my head.



A car pulls up and out come Jenkins, IceBlueFire, Mr-Torn and Mix wanting to help me get a new car so I can go home. Foxxeh. FallenGuardian, Swag and Porny stop by to check on things.

Finally I put down my window and head toward the docks. After this long night I cant wait to get into a hot tub.

WHAT??? I slam on the brakes is that Elsa and a witch, ninja turtles and batman? They come running toward the car, I cringe down in my seat, afraid of what will happen next.

HEY LADY!! TRICK OR TREAT!!! GIVE US CANDY!

OMG I need a vicodin


Garton [376397]

One dark night the evil spirits ruled the city known as Tornberry
From the airport to the docks there wasnt a safe road to walk.
Never since the days of the notorious barber Sweeney_Todd has so much blood been spilled.
Xukusari the werewolf bit MissxMiNx, she tasted Divalicious like cinnamon, no wait it was more like aeroroot flavor , then she turned into a werewolf and ripped open the throat of jaiden, thatirishguy daveO and Karalynn
The newest Mr-Torn DevilSoldier60 was blindsided by Madmiketyson "OMG are Uriel?" said devilsoldier60 "you have given me impact-blur, now that was bad Kharma for you M Mike",
suddenly a teardrop fell from his eye, then another, soon it was like a Hydro plant spilling water everywhere,the Mix of anger and pain began to well up inside him and his usual taktikz of avoiding conflict was replaced by pure hate.
Hhe jumped on the hate train of chaos, Greg Jenkins as he was christened, let out a mighty roar and his skin split off his body, he sprouted claws and teeth big and sharp, no longer a fluffy happy guy but now, with steely eyes of icebluefire,
he attacked his target. Two rapid strikes took off the head of Madmiketyson.
Chedburn walked around the corner and witnessed the horror happening in his city.
He contemplated turning his city into an -18- plus zone, but feeling a little porny he ran away to the pimptress Trish hired a blondie called foxxeh for comfort.
Clansdancer was annoyed at this she cut off cheds bigsset1 by 1 and used her bloody trophy as swag bag to hold all her city finds like human heads and other body parts
she sang a strange song as she entered the old peoples home ..
soon you will be dead as I come to take off your head ,
Happy happy Halloween im the evil killing queen .
soon you will be dead as I come to take off your head ,
Happy happy Halloween im the evil killing queen
soon you will be dead as I come to take off your head ,
Happy happy Halloween im the evil killing queen .
soon you will be dead as I come to take off your head ,
Happy happy Halloween im the evil killing queen..
Karalynn [517092]

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