Was f**king about with some smoke tools and wahtnot on photoshop just wanting some feedback on how my graphics are going here is my newest one :)
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Feedback please??
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Was f**king about with some smoke tools and wahtnot on photoshop just wanting some feedback on how my graphics are going here is my newest one :)
[image: s3.amazonaws.com]
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I don't understand the piece. Its far to simplistic and random (as no one would want to buy a piece with smoke brushes on a stock photo). Learn more about effects. It might be easier to learn with a render as stocks can be a little tricky (most people use renders here and completely avoid stocks).
But you can attempt to develop this further. Maybe make the smoke fit in by replacing his head with that of a skull and then use the smoke as a sort of web. Mess with adjustments to darken the piece a bit and make it have a Halloween vibe.
You don't have to do this but notice that this is one way of maturing your theme. If its too simplistic out risk it not making sense. With what is currently there it doesn't feel like a piece of art but more of an experiment of a possible technique.
I suppose your correct Its just a aus rapper wih some weed smoke in the background, Buh yeah i need to work more with renders you are correct there bruh.. Thanks for the feedback though man and the advice :)