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smudging across the hat is f**king terrible. cant help but think youve used too many colours as well, i would have said just using the darker purple tones and the black-charcoal-grey tones would have been better for your smudging colours
I like the colours :D matches his shirt xD and smudging across the hat imo is not a bad thing, just badly executed :/
f**k ur rusty bish. :-p
5/10, it's not f**king dreadful.
but it's pretty damn crap.
GO back to be fat head.
That's very generous of you
tag has good flow. i can see you made an attempt at creating depth but it still needs some work, not bad for a first sig in months.
Not bad. I like the atmo in general, the lighting's natural, i think the colours are ok but it might have more impact if you stuck to a colour scheme. On the flipside you need to fix your brush settings - it's a little jittery and it's kinda jarring on the eye. Not as much as it could be, but it could just flow a little more smoothly. Smudging across the hat doesn't quite work but this is also the bit where the actual smudging flows best.
Overall, id suggest to maybe give your focal a little more room, and give it some light.
As it is it's a kinda amateur-y style. Your skills are fine, you know what you're doing technically, but you're just going at it with the wrong approach. Be more bold in what you do.
Glad to see you back paddy