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_ARES_ [1948020]

in my profile page i posted a pic of a profile picture that i did, the one with the doll, i need some critism on what i should change and what i should do with it. thanks :)
-IRON- [1306965]

You made the image darker and added shit text, I would recommend scrapping it and looking at some tutorials.

Edit: The first image on your profile is also ripped.
Riah [1874211]
[image: i39.photobucket.com]

ftfy

okay, so my remake isn't the best but i only had shit to work with, okay? no idea why you'd even use that picture, it's terrible. what the hell were you thinking, adding contrast to it? the dirt on the doll's face makes it entirely too intense and just ... ugh. you'd want to FADE IT or some other shit, idek.

moving on, your choice of font. dear god in heaven. i actually like it, but it doesn't mesh well with the picture you chose. to me the font gives off godfather vibes, which means you'd want something to match, ya dig? i can't even go on i'm so bored appalled sooo