Its been quite a while since I've tried this but let me know what I can improve on with this
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Its been quite a while since I've tried this but let me know what I can improve on with this
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+rep. Wow thats great work. Any chance you can do a sig for me ? Pleaase ^_^
text is too big. Make my eyes doubt what i should look at first, render/text....text render. Composition, rules of third. Keep your text close to render so the eyes know where to start. Its how our brain works, don't ask me why lol
but it's deadpool tho :D <3 loved the movie :'))
Nines right, the render barely even seems to be noticeable on a quick glance, you want that to be the primary thing you look too first as opposed to the text + as your text is currently acting as the focal it's far too central
Thanks for the critique guys, ill take note of the font and give it another shot. I didn't spend too much time on the font so ill post an updated one when I get some free time
Offcented focal, interesting placement of text however it kills and distracts, needs more color varients but sicne its my man DEADPOOL I LIKE. I suggest looking towards adding 1: Ambience 2: Some depth of field 3:Compostion without reoccuring towards text as a balance.