CNC

worked on this grouchy bastard over the weekend for practice - how's it looking?

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That's sick! The dead space on the right bothers me a little, maybe increase the size of the font and center it over there? Looks awesome though. I also like your floki!

Thanks man! I think bumping up the font size & moving it right helped a lot. Still playing with the text - let me know if you have any ideas...

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Please work on adding some more in the signature.

You could try to look at some examples on how to get a font looking right. Now you just pasted the text on overlay and just left it. You want to make it part of the sig. I miss depth and a sense of flow. Now it just kind of looks like you made a bg and put the render on top. Try to make it more whole, blend the render a bit more.

Sorry if i sound harsh but there are plenty of tutorials available. I'd love to give you advice or teach you how to try to show what I mean.

Never give up!

I'd also take a look at the lighting in it - your render has a top-down lighting approach. Everything else seems to have the light source behind the render and the text has a sort of 270* lighting to it.

Appreciate the feedback - back to the old drawing board and work on this one some more...

Terrible

CNC means constructive criticism, he is asking for feedback to not be terrible. Your comment is not only unnecessary but rude. But yeah I gotta agree with you its pretty bad :P Point is that he asking for help, dont just be an ass and shit all over him.

Search some tutorial on deviant art :) don't 1:1 copy them but take note of the technique used. I'd suggest starting out with a basic smudge signature