There is a small Grammatical Error in the organised crime 'Best of the Lot'. It says 'They Concludes' rather than 'they conclude'
Small Grammatical Error
Started by joshuap1 [3672467] on in Bugs & Issues.
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No, it's referring to , who concludes they have to move the car. Source: I wrote the OC. - CloudJumper [1636201] · 1 likes ·
Passing along to Ash. Thanks..!!
Yep, its one of the lines which takes the gender string (in this case eggyk who is enby), so would be correct for He/She but wrong for They.
Good spot :)
Eggy is the imitator, when it says they it's referring to the others who are trying to steal the car, not eggyk
Passing along to Ash.
Thanks..!!
Yeah this is a pronoun issue. I've requested it be changed to reference the player's name instead, particularly as one path leading to this scene doesn't mention the player's name previously. Should be updated shortly. Thanks!
Really? It mentions 'the others' finding a vehicle, then they conclude they'll have to move it by hand. When it says 'they' it's referring to the 'others' not one person.
No, it's referring to , who concludes they have to move the car.
Source: I wrote the OC.
I'm pretty sure both me and another person were there, otherwise it say others and then randomly just disregards the other person