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act4 [3638788] · #1

City Hall: cut-off (see photo)

Bank: refers to "Torn City", "APR's" shouldn't have an apostrophe

Education: "hundreds" of courses is incorrect (there are only 141 total)

Donator House: "in to" should be one word, happens twice

Print store: comma after "confidential project" should be after the speech marks, not inside

Jail: refers to "Torn City"

Hospital: refers to "Torn City"

Pharmacy: refers to "Torn City"

 

Also lots of minor inconsistencies with capitalising the place name or not, and the place name in the description not matching the actual place name itself.

 

P.S. If you have any volunteer proofreader vacancies open let me know!

 

 

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