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  • Chedburn [1] Admin · 2 likes ·
    That's how Duke speaks. It's intended - and I like it!
  • Chedburn [1] Admin · 1 likes ·
    I don't see a problem with this grammar? It looks good to me, semi-colon use looks accurate?
Dragon_Ryda [643435] · #1 · edited

I have been watching you for some time now;
should be I have been watching you for some time now,

still reading but saw a few more where they should be exclamation points. not a grammar nazi. but hey why not point them out lol
Stente [1899758] · #4 · edited

Yeap, I agree with Ched - that looks to me like correct use of semicolon. It could be substituted with an "and" without giving the sentence other meaning.

I'm not a native English speaker though, so could be wrong.
Seven7 [1616051] · #5
New Kid on the BlockEasy


"Holy moly someone's eaten a whole bunch of knuckle sandwiches! Some people just don't lie down when you hit them, which seems unfair to me. Anyhow, you done okay. Rest up a little--put some ice on that fat lip. When I got more people what need someone to put a hit on them, we'll be talking."


I think the right word should be "who".. not being a grammar nazi but i was rather confused for awhile at the sentence not being fluid..







Harley [258120] Wiki Contributor · #8 · edited

-> Tries to correct grammar in the new missions -> doesn't know how to spell grammar ( cfr. forum topic)

The irony is strong with this one.